So I've watched myself play many times and i've noticed a lot of things that i do that i need to improve on. But I wanted to post a video so that i can get advice from other drummers. Keep in mind that when we recorded this video i was exhausted from practicing for a while, plus it was hot. I was pretty much making stuff up as i went. And yes, its supposed to get softer then louder then softer then louder.
Forgive me for this is the best quality video of me playing and i'm not even playing my best